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- August 16th, 2011, 4:02 am
- Forum: Archives
- Topic: Training: Calgor Grim [Completed]
- Replies: 38
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Re: Training: Calgor Grim
As the scenario is unmoderated, you may carry on. You are in control of the opponents. However, this post was indicative of your abilities in moderated situations, so that's a plus.
- August 16th, 2011, 3:58 am
- Forum: Archives
- Topic: Training: Seth Gunnells [Suspended]
- Replies: 33
- Views: 39022
Re: Training: Seth Gunnells
Scanning around your near vicinity with your arms, you grab hold of something cold and hard, and not too heavy.
- August 16th, 2011, 3:53 am
- Forum: Archives
- Topic: Training: Kell Barakis [Suspended]
- Replies: 21
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Re: Training: Kell Barakis
The actions are described well. You must make a better effort regarding grammar and spelling. Use a spelling checker or a text editor for your posts if you need to. k K ell was outraged "HEY YOU GET BACK HERE!!!" Kell pushed through the crowd chasing after the suspi s ci ous robed man.The...
- July 30th, 2011, 4:13 am
- Forum: Archives
- Topic: Training: Calgor Grim [Completed]
- Replies: 38
- Views: 43426
Re: Training: Calgor Grim
The barkeep smiled, "Apology accepted, and I'd like to extend mine. I'm afraid there aren't many sights around this particular area. This is all bars and markets stalls. There's also an industrial district, but I doubt that is the kind of sight you were looking for. The next best thing is about...
- July 30th, 2011, 3:57 am
- Forum: Archives
- Topic: Training: Seth Gunnells [Suspended]
- Replies: 33
- Views: 39022
Re: Training: Seth Gunnells
Your action failed, but essentially it has bought you time anyways. Seth's foot aimed true at the man's groin, but got caught between his strong legs in a reflex before hitting target. This did slow down the man, as he was now a leg's length away from Seth, unable to reach his throat while clamping...
- July 29th, 2011, 5:14 pm
- Forum: Archives
- Topic: Training: Calgor Grim [Completed]
- Replies: 38
- Views: 43426
Re: Training: Calgor Grim
The Muun eyed Calgor briefly, catching a glimpse of the crystal. Then he looked Calgor straight into the eye again, saying "I'm terribly sorry, the way you asked that question came across as if you're looking for something specifically. But I don't know what you are talking about. The barkeep p...
- July 29th, 2011, 4:59 pm
- Forum: Archives
- Topic: Training: Seth Gunnells [Suspended]
- Replies: 33
- Views: 39022
Re: Training: Seth Gunnells
Very good, Seth. You describe your characters emotions well and set a tense tone for the situation. Please remember this is still part of the moderated combat training, therefore you cannot control your opponents actions. This includes whether they successfully dodge your attacks or not. Moderated ...
- July 25th, 2011, 7:29 am
- Forum: Freestyle RP
- Topic: The Smell of Rain
- Replies: 1
- Views: 10524
Re: The Smell of Rain
The spa was so quiet, so peaceful. The room filled with mixed light herbal aromas from Q'maere. Deep-sea herbs which reminded of home. Home. That place had become such a distant memory now. Droplets of water condensated on the large viewports of the Baudo -class Star Yacht 'Bauzzini Messenger'. Slow...
- July 25th, 2011, 5:58 am
- Forum: Freestyle RP
- Topic: The Smell of Rain
- Replies: 1
- Views: 10524
The Smell of Rain
I'd appreciate if you refrained from posting here. This is meant to be a journal of sorts. A way to express my character publicly. This is my character development and it's an ongoing work in progress.
Thanks for understanding.
Thanks for understanding.
- July 24th, 2011, 6:33 am
- Forum: Archives
- Topic: Training: Kell Barakis [Suspended]
- Replies: 21
- Views: 40047
Re: Training: Kell Barakis
Very good, Kell. That was quite descriptive and even a bit funny to read the Wookie being owned like that. When roleplaying, just like reading a novel, it is unusual to use (parentheses). In formal texts we use them to explain more about another part of the sentence. In roleplaying they should be a...