[OOC][TRAINING] Blazing Aces

[Cuyan Hulo]

Any OOC discussions needing to be made can be done so here. Kiel, if you have questions as to how you should RP, post them here and we can get them answered, and have a good time.

[Kalzel Gryjiss]

Can you tell me what font colours you two are using? I want to be consistent...

[Saheen Tikeerleesh]

This is my character talking or thinking.

This is me mimicking someone else talking.

[Cuyan Hulo]

Hey guys, I should have made it more clear in the post, but all of you guys should already be on base. Hence the "expected to leave within an hour". I should have made that more explicit, so I do take blame for that. Could Kal abd Saheen change their posts to keep it more in line of that? Also, love the imagery Kiel. Everyone else needs to take notes! xP

[Kalzel Gryjiss]

Curse my jittery hands that prevent me from drawing realistically!

[Talak Kasra]

Excellent work all of you, your first posts were all good. Just a few notes, to kinda streamline the posting. Edits are not necessary, this is a learning experience after all.

Kiel: Saheen is a Barabel, very recognizable race however I understand you had no way of knowing that without a picture. Just for future reference. Also a few minor grammatical and spelling errors with the description. Understanding that not all of the people in Combine have English as a first language, however, it was very acceptable. Also consider changing the color of thought text so it is not the same as speech text, to minimize confusion.

Kalzel: Vertically means up and down, yet you listed that the blow was below the ribcage?

Saheen: The color scheme you are using for speech is a little difficult to read on the dark background of the forum, consider using a lighter color.

Beyond all that, excellent work. Remember, RP is about the flow of the scenario and how easily the other readers can picture everything that is going on in their mind's eye.

[Kalzel Gryjiss]

Yup! An upward slash against a lightly armored foe currently reeling backwards led from the side...
Kalzel thinks of weird stuff when bored.

[Kalzel Gryjiss]

So, I finally gave in to peer pressure and started coloring my text.

"This is talking."

And this is thinking.

[Cuyan Hulo]

Been super busy the past few days. I should have the next post by tonight/tomorrow

[Kalzel Gryjiss]

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